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I am fully committed to creating a workplace that is welcoming, inclusive, safe and respectful for every member of our team.
Right off the bat this sounds like any one of a thousand canned phrases we've all heard over and over and over. Just missing "robust" in there. Saying she's fully committed seems... I don't know. Was there an option to being partially committed? These messages have more impact if they are more personalized and not buzz phrases.
I always suggest adding 'or else' on the end of any bafflegab phrase like that and it will probably come off as a little more authentic.